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Have Traffic? Now What?

November 15th, 2007 by Pat

Like an old basketball coach would say….”Follow-Through!”.

You spend time and money to drive traffic to your website. Many of us in the travel and tourism industry rely on visitors to submit forms, requesting additional information or to check availability. Sadly, the follow-up on these requests is often lacking attention which can and does cost businesses in the end.

Here are some simple rules to follow to help convert more of those that contact you via email.

To begin with, respond in a timely manner. The Internet makes information available on-demand. Right or wrong, your visitors are not only wanting, but expecting a timely reply to their emails. If you are only checking and responding to email “every so often”, you aren’t serious about leveraging the Internet to help your business.

Check email often and respond in a timely manner. The caveat with timely response is that a high-quality, yet slightly slower response, is more valuable than a “quick and dirty” response. Auto-responders should be used with great care and you should not pat yourself on the back if you consider your auto-responder as a timely response.

Keep the subject line in-tact from the initial message. This will help “remind” the visitor’s that your email is relevant and not spam. Also keep the message thread in tact so both you and visitor can track the ‘conversation’.

This may sound like a given, but personalize the response! Use their name in the salutation and use your own name in the closing. Nothing can come across as more impersonal than an email signed, “Customer Service Rep 22341″.

If you want people to buy from you, you must establish trust, and forging a relationship is the fastest way to make that happen. Something as simple as personalizing an email can help.

Answer their questions. If they ask for specific information or have specific needs, address them! When you personalize a response and address their specific questions it proves that a real, live human being is responding to them.

DO NOT direct them to visit your website for more information! The majority of them will have just come from there and could not find the information they needed.

Be polite and positive. Another, “no kiddin’” tip, but it is surprising how few companies I see doing this well. Which do you think would be more warmly received

“To make a reservation please call 111-111-111-1111 between 8 and 6.”

OR

“To make a reservation please call us at your earliest convenience. We look forward to speaking with you and will be happy to help you reserve your trip.”

Don’t go overboard with the flowery prose and blatant ass-kissing, however, be genuine and let people know you appreciate them and want to offer them the best possible service.

Be clear and simple with your writing. Sadly, the average American reads at the 7th/8th grade level. Skip the big words and keep the sentences and paragraphs short.

Also be sure to proofread for common mistakes and misspellings. Have a list of words you have trouble spelling? Most of us non-Mensa types do. Keep the list handy.

Lastly, make it easy for people to contact you. Create a simple “signature” in your email client that includes the contact information most important to your visitors.

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Create Compelling, Engaging Content for Your Website

December 12th, 2006 by Pat

One of the most important, yet most overlooked, component of your website is your content…more specifically your copywriting.

In almost all of my projects it seems that copywriting is an afterthought, just the icing on the cake so to speak. Quality copywriting can make even a bad design effective, and poor copywriting can make a great design bomb.

Can the topic of creating quality content be covered in a single blog post…absolutely not. I have been working hard of late to gain more knowledge of this all important topic.

Some outstanding books include Waiting for Your Cat to Bark and Call to Action, both by Jefferey and Bryan Eisenberg. The core of these books is creating compelling content, relevant to the visitors persona using a technique which they call ‘Persuasion Architecture’. Highly recommended.

Some themes and important concepts to keep in mind when creating your website content.

  • Write with terms that your visitors use in describing your product of service
  • Ditch the jargon, acronyms and keep it simple and to the point
  • Chunk up your copy allowing for easy scanning…use quality, descriptive subheaders
  • Use hyperlinks effectively…moving visitors down the conversion pipeline
  • Empathize with your visitor, put yourself in their shoes in viewing your product or service
  • Go easy on superlatives
  • Create an emotional tie with the visitor, make them envision themselves using your product or service
  • Write in active voice as much as possible
  • Accentuate the benefits that will come from your service….not the features
  • Be concise
  • Understand the buying cycle and trigger words associated with each phase (See Call to Action)

This is just a short list of things which can make an immediate impact on the success of your website. Read a book, take a class and learn more about how you can create quality, relevant and highly effective copy for your webpages.

What are your thoughts on creating quality content and copywriting?

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